These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their families with them. Do you think the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages in terms of family development?
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It can be commonly seen that when people move to other countries for employment, their families also accompany them. While there might some negative consequences of this on family, I would argue that it is far more beneficial.
There are many obvious benefits of going abroad to work along with family. To begin with, individuals have more bonding with family. The family relationship would not be weakened by distance. Some couples finally end up in divorce, as one or both of them cannot endure the long-term separation. Secondly, many people feel homesick and lonely and therefore cannot adjust in the foreign country and return home thereby missing the golden opportunity of working abroad.
Finally, children, especially those who are at young ages, need care from both parents. Childhood is a crucial phase of life and comes only once. If children are deprived of one parent’s love it may have a considerable impact on their psyche. Therefore, working abroad with family can provide complete love and care to the children. What is more, children too are benefited from international exposure.
On the other hand, there are some problems of working abroad with families. To begin with, living with family members abroad means more expenses. A single person can share a room with someone in the initial stages, but a complete family needs a proper house. What is more, all the members face the stress of adapting to alien surroundings. Parents themselves feel culture shock and therefore cannot help their children.
Summing up, there are both advantages and disadvantages in any choice of this issue. Personally, I believe that people should decide according to their specific circumstances. If there are financial constraints, then it is better to go alone initially. However, the family should be called as early as possible.
Plan followed:
Intro: Advantages more than disadvantages
Para 1: Advantages
Para 2: More advantages
Para 3: Disadvantages
Conclusion:
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