IELTS Academic Essay 24th Oct 2020 India 1 PM

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

ESSAY NUMBER 142 FROM OUR BOOK

It is believed by some that the most effective solution of addressing the issue of deteriorating environment is increasing fuel prices. While I believe that raising the price of fuels such as petrol and diesel may help in curbing this issue to some extent, it is not the best solution to solve the environmental problems of the world.

On the one hand, it is true that increasing fuel prices will cause some car owners to use public transportation systems or rideshare services, drive less, and walk more. This means fewer vehicles on the road and that will cause a drop in the carbon emissions that are very bad for our environment and health. Industries might also turn to eco-friendly options if possible.

However, this solution is certainly not without its flaws. Firstly, a great number of vehicles in a country are owned by the affluent. For them, the cost of fuel is very low compared with life’s other necessities and so an increase in fuel prices may not change their nature towards car usage. Instead a better solution could be to improve road conditions and build a faster and more efficient public transport system. For example, not only the poor but also the rich prefer the Delhi metro over cars.

Another effective way to reduce transportation-related air pollution emissions is to use clean vehicle and fuel technologies. These include fuel-efficient vehicles that use less oil, cleaner fuels that produce fewer emissions, and electric cars and trucks. In fact, all the major car companies like Honda, Toyota, Ford are ramping up electric car production. So instead of raising fuel prices and invoking hard feelings among people, the government can give incentives to people to buy these environment-friendly vehicles.

Summing up, higher fuel prices may put a small dent in air pollution but other measures like building a better public transport system and cleaner environment-friendly vehicles are better solutions to our environmental problems.

Plan followed:
Intro: Disagree with some concession
Para 1: Benefits of increasing fuel prices
Para 2: Why other methods are better and the flaws of this method
Para 3: Other effective methods
Conclusion: Reiterate opinion


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